Dear students
Those of you who have taken the time to blog your homework have done such a wonderful service for me.
I can look at your work and plan lessons based on where you are working well and where there are some basic errors. It has also been a pleasure to give you a platform to showcase your skills as young writers. Many of you show great promise and I wish you every success in your future studies.
Please feel free to keep using the blog or shoot me an email if you need a helping hand when your assignments are due. I would be more than happy to do some proof reading for you or give you assistance in whatever way you need.
My 6 weeks at Corinda have been challenging and inspiring and you are the students who have made it all worthwhile.
All the very best wishes and thank you again
Your grateful teacher
Marina Fielke
we will miss you!
Redfern Lake
November 14, 2025
To the dear boy and his dog
Are you still alive? Well, that is an utterly stupid question that I’m asking. If you are reading this letter, you are obviously alive. Hello! I am the girl you met the other day. I was the one flying a wingset? ; Wearing the skinny blue jeans and a white, blue, striped t-shirt. Do you recall me yet?
I guess not. After all, I only remember you from acting so abnormal and being so weird.
Any who, I was wondering, did you still have any other people with you for example, any settlements you are with? Can you understand me? It’s hard to tell, since you’re dying. Well, I hope you can read anyway. This letter is going to waste, and would be very pointless if you cannot.
Though, if you can then, hurry up and write back. The address is above on the letter. Quickly.
Diana
Redfern Lake
November 17, 2025
Dear Mum
Mum, I guess you would have noticed I’ve been avoiding you. I can tell that you have been trying to avoid me as well. Ah! This is all because of that imbecile, Hector! He is at fault! I knew I should have never helped him from the beginning.
Seriously though, mum, tell me the truth, is this the only way we will talk from now on? Well, it is easier for me to say what I want now, without getting interrupted I mean. Though I just can’t believe that you would never tell me about him; that you have been secretly out to feed him everyday, playing chess so ever happy with him. If I never knew about him, you and that moron, Hector probably would have kept on deceiving me. Isn’t that right? Well then, I hope you and your so called “chess apprentice” keep playing chess happily together, because that relationship means so much more than a daughter-mother relationship to you. Besides, I wouldn’t care nonetheless, that game is so boring; I don’t understand how you can manage to play for hours.
Your deceived Daughter
Diana
Redfern Lake
December 25, 2025
Dear Hector
You can be so nosy about our lives, but anyway Merry Christmas! I hope you like your present, though it might come late. I won’t tell you what it is because I’m afraid you’ll read this letter first. So, you will just have to wait. You’re curious now, aren’t you? Nosy boy! Which reminds me. Where is my present? You better have my present. Or else I have no option but to kick you out. Ahah, Just joking! Though I still better have a present.
Anyway, I was wondering, what you said last night to Beth and Evan, was it all true? That you would be staying here? With us? Not that I care anyways. I’m just checking if an extra person would be living with Beth, Evan and me; and plus I have to make sure you do things correctly. Since you said that you were helping out with whatever needed to be done. Well then, again Merry Christmas! And hurry up and reply back I want a letter for my present too!
Yours truly,
Miss can you please edit this draft to see if i had made any mistakes or if you could make it better.